Posts tagged: scripts

On The Balcony

A 6-page comic book script.

On The Balcony


The Dead Monkey

A 15-page comic book script.

The Dead Monkey


Happy Cake

A 2-page comic book script.

Happy Cake


The 3 Wishes

A 4-page comic book script.

The 3 Wishes


Password Ethic

A 6-page comic book script.

Password Ethic


Abandon All Hope

A 4-page comic book script.

Abandon All Hope


No Water For Gloria

No Water For Gloria is a 3-page comic book script I wrote.

No Water For Gloria


Betrayal à deux

Betrayal à deux is a 6-page comic book script I wrote.

Betrayal à deux


Fan Fiction: The Hulk

Here’s a 5-page script I finished this evening. The story has been floating around in my head for about a year now.
It’s a story about The Incredible Hulk called “Lunch”.

The Hulk and all related characters are ™ and © Marvel Comics.


WARNING: This script contains explicit language not suitable for minors!




PAGE ONE (five panels)

Panel 1: A sunny afternoon. Bruce Banner walks into a small restaurant. He is wearing a white shirt, brown pants and a wrist watch on his left arm. There are a few people in the restaurant having lunch. There are 15 tables and a serving counter. Behind the counter is a door which leads to the kitchen.

CAP / TITLE:
THE INCREDIBLE HULK IN “LUNCH”


Panel 2: He sits down at a small table next to a window.


Panel 3: A waitress stands next his table. She is twenty-two years old and pretty. She smiles at Bruce. She hands him a menu. She is holding a small notepad and a pencil in her other hand.

WAITRESS:
HI. WOULD YOU LIKE A FEW MINUTES TO LOOK AT THE MENU?

BRUCE:
HI. NO, I KNOW WHAT I WANT. CAN I PLEASE HAVE YOUR MEGA LUNCH?


Panel 4: She writes it down.

WAITRESS:
HOW WOULD YOU LIKE YOUR EGGS AND STEAK DONE?

BRUCE:
PLEASE MAKE THE EGGS WELL DONE AND THE STEAK MEDIUM RARE. CAN I HAVE MUSHROOMS INSTEAD OF BEANS?


Panel 5: She nods and writes it down.

WAITRESS:
MUSHROOMS INSTEAD OF BEANS. THE MEGA LUNCH COMES WITH COFFEE OR TEA.

BRUCE:
TEA, WITH 3 SUGARS.




PAGE TWO (six panels)

Panel 1: She writes it down.

WAITRESS:
TEA, 3 SUGARS. ANYTHING ELSE?

BRUCE:
NO, THAT’S IT. THANKS.


Panel 2: She walks away towards the counter. Bruce stares out the window.


Panel 3: Bruce looks at his watch.

CAP:
20 MINUTES LATER.

BRUCE (thought):
WHAT’S TAKING SO LONG?


Panel 4: The waitress arrives with the food. She is smiling. There is no steam rising from the tea.

CAP:
40 MINUTES LATER.

BRUCE (thought):
FINALLY!

WAITRESS:
ENJOY YOUR MEAL.


Panel 5: Bruce stares at his meal in disbelief.

BRUCE (thought):
WHAT THE HELL?


Panel 6: A close-up of his plate. The two eggs are runny, there are beans instead of mushrooms and the large steak is burnt. There are also four slices of toast, three slices of tomato, a pile of onion rings and roast vegetables.

BRUCE (thought):
RUNNY EGGS, BEANS AND A BURNT STEAK. I… I SAW HER WRITE DOWN MY ORDER.




PAGE THREE (six panels)

Panel 1: Bruce looks at the waitress who is taking an order from another customer.

BRUCE (thought):
IS SHE INCOMPETENT? IS IT THE CHEF’S FAULT?


Panel 2: He picks up a piece of egg with his fork. The egg drips onto the plate. He looks angry.

BRUCE (thought):
HOW COULD THEY FUCK IT UP? IT WAS SO SIMPLE.


Panel 3: He chews the egg. He is even angrier.

BRUCE (thought):
TOO LATE TO ORDER ANOTHER LUNCH. I HAVE TO EAT THIS SHIT!


Panel 4: He lifts the cup of tea to his mouth. He is struggling to control his anger.

BRUCE (thought):
SHE FORGOT THE DAMN SUGAR. DID SHE PUT IT IN THE TEA?


Panel 5: He spits out the tea.

BRUCE:
GAAH!


Panel 6: The waitress walks towards his table. He stares at the cup. He is extremely angry. His teeth are clenched.

WAITRESS:
IS EVERYTHING OK?

BRUCE:
COLD TEA. NO SUGAR.




PAGE FOUR (four panels)

Panel 1: Bruce crushes the cup in his hand. He shouts at the waitress.

SFX:
CRUNCH!

WAITRESS:
WHAT THE…?

BRUCE:
OK!? YOU ASK IF EVERYTHING IS OK!?


Panel 2: She looks scared. Bruce is standing next to the table, facing the waitress. His skin is starting to turn green.

WAITRESS:
PLEASE CALM DOWN, SIR…


Panel 3: Bruce is bent forward in pain. His shirt tears along his back. He is transforming into the Hulk.

BRUCE:
GAAHHH!!!!


Panel 4: Bruce transforms fully into the Hulk. The waitress screams. The other customers look at him in horror.

WAITRESS:
AAAARGH!!




PAGE FIVE (two panels)

Panel 1: Hulk lifts the table above his head. The waitress and the customers run out the door.

HULK:
HULK ANGRY!


Panel 2: Hulk throws the table into the counter.

SFX:
CRASH!!

HULK:
HULK SMASH INCOMPETENCE!

CAP:
FIN

Third script complete for GEP # 3

I’ve finished the third script for GEP issue 3.
It is a 6-page horror with the working title of “The box”.

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